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Her Indifference

Certain it is, That her rejection, untold suffering upon Him, would bring But Her indifference, Would be the one, his condemnation to Unhappiness to sign! © Demetrios Trifiatis 22 OCTOBER 2014

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/23/2014 2:24:00 PM

Outright rejection better than cruel indifference. I like your train of thought. Apathy is the biggest epidemic!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/24/2014 7:05:00 AM

Very well said my friend, Timothy! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2014 3:10:00 AM

- Deep and touching thoughts in your beautiful poem, dear Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2014 8:25:00 AM

Thank you my dearest, Anne Lise, for your visit and lovely comment!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/22/2014 11:28:00 PM

How true my friend... I know it all to well

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2014 8:04:00 AM

Who doesn't know how true these words are my friend, Tim? We all have been victims one time or another to these two slayers of tender feelings, however, out of pain springs wisdom that benefits us in the long run! Thank you for visiting!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/22/2014 3:53:00 PM

Demetrios, My Good Friend . . . another deeply thoughtful Epigram here. Both rejection and indifference are never good in love, whether considered together or singly. A "7" again. You are the consummate Epigram Writer!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2014 8:01:00 AM

So good to see you back, mein guter freund, Gary! Yes, we all victims to these two tyrants of the heart but still our hearts are forged by their presence and make us better for the next person in line! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a heartfelt way, my friend Gary!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/22/2014 9:45:00 AM

Nothing hurts more than rejection in love..Powerful and deep epigram indeed.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/23/2014 7:54:00 AM

We all, dear Charmaine, have been victims, in different degrees of rejection and od indifference, this however doesn't mean that we are less worthy, it simply means God in his infinite wisdom has prepared us for someone else! He knows best! Thank you for your visit and comment!