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Her Indifference

Certain it is,
That her rejection, untold suffering upon   
Him, would bring
 
But

Her indifference,
Would be the one, his condemnation to 
Unhappiness to sign!   


  

© Demetrios Trifiatis
  22 OCTOBER 2014

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Timothy Hicks

October 23, 2014 at 2:24 PM

Outright rejection better than cruel indifference. I like your train of thought. Apathy is the biggest epidemic!

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 24, 2014 at 7:05 AM

Very well said my friend, Timothy! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 23, 2014 at 3:10 AM

- Deep and touching thoughts in your beautiful poem, dear Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 23, 2014 at 8:25 AM

Thank you my dearest, Anne Lise, for your visit and lovely comment!

Tim Smith

October 22, 2014 at 11:28 PM

How true my friend... I know it all to well

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 23, 2014 at 8:04 AM

Who doesn't know how true these words are my friend, Tim? We all have been victims one time or another to these two slayers of tender feelings, however, out of pain springs wisdom that benefits us in the long run! Thank you for visiting!

Gary Bateman

October 22, 2014 at 3:53 PM

Demetrios, My Good Friend . . . another deeply thoughtful Epigram here. Both rejection and indifference are never good in love, whether considered together or singly. A "7" again. You are the consummate Epigram Writer!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 23, 2014 at 8:01 AM

So good to see you back, mein guter freund, Gary! Yes, we all victims to these two tyrants of the heart but still our hearts are forged by their presence and make us better for the next person in line! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a heartfelt way, my friend Gary!

Charmaine Chircop

October 22, 2014 at 9:45 AM

Nothing hurts more than rejection in love..Powerful and deep epigram indeed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 23, 2014 at 7:54 AM

We all, dear Charmaine, have been victims, in different degrees of rejection and od indifference, this however doesn't mean that we are less worthy, it simply means God in his infinite wisdom has prepared us for someone else! He knows best! Thank you for your visit and comment!

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