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Her Heart Flutters

Stripped of friends and family she lives in squalor’s misery The tiny tenement room bespeaks her gloom and doom Yet when Friday evening arrives her heart flutters, comes alive Ignited by kindling Sabbath lights her face aglow throughout the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/30/2025 5:17:00 PM
Faith in God can help us to bear up! I agree with Sara…should be POTD!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2025 8:30:00 PM
POTD, ok. We can always play 'pretend.' lol.
Date: 7/30/2025 4:32:00 PM
a poem worthy of POTD! The flow and rhyme scheme were perfect...the ending was the best. Well done, Gershon! Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/30/2025 8:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Sara.

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