Her Green

A whispering wind
As savory fruit takes bloom
Heart touching roses live
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 5:32 PM
sweeeeeeeeeeetttt! Light & Love
Anish Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 10:38 AM
Nice alliteration in the first line. You have captured the essence of spring in your fine haiku Yours Matthew Anish
Moreno Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:51 PM
A whispering wind, beautiful line. I left you some soup mail...Raul
Neal Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:45 PM
Beautiful work, loved this haiku. DN
Chircop Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:44 PM
what a lovely whispering wind breezing softly on this site--bravo---charma
Megens Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 2:16 PM
SHORT TOUCHING SWEET REALISTIC THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENTS I JUST POSTED ANOTHER ONE THE DVILS DEMISE KEEP WRITING LOVE
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