Her Gift


natures lace doilies

silently they fall ~ her gift
 
a white crocheted shawl



Written 28th December 2020
Syllables Per Line:	5 7 5

Premier Contest Hi-Ku (4)
Sponsor Brian Strand
8th Place

givingnaturesnowhaiku

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Line Gauthier

March 22, 2021 at 6:59 AM

Wow ~ beautiful metaphors

Ann Gilmour

March 23, 2021 at 2:44 AM

thank you dear friend x

Panagiota Romios

January 3, 2021 at 2:55 PM

Perfect...delicate as your heart. Congrats... Pangie xx

Ann Gilmour

January 7, 2021 at 2:32 AM

Awww your words lift my soul ~ thank you. With kindest thoughts and love from Ann xx

Jan Allison

December 29, 2020 at 3:23 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Ann:-) this is so delightful, its a joy to read it again:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

December 30, 2020 at 4:46 AM

Awww thank you Jan for your congrats and sweet words. I was thrilled to get a placement in Brian's premier contest though would so love that little gold cup next to my poem ~ maybe one day... love and hugs Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

December 29, 2020 at 1:08 AM

A lovely image Ann, hope you had a nice Christmas and best wishes for the new year. Tom

Ann Gilmour

December 30, 2020 at 4:43 AM

Many thanks Tom, glad you liked it. To be honest I am glad it is all over, as I was on my own, as family were stuck in tier 4 and as you know it is not a good time for me, but I hope you and your family had a great time. Happy New Year to you all. With kindest thoughts Ann xx