Her Gift

natures lace doilies silently they fall ~ her gift a white crocheted shawl Written 28th December 2020 Syllables Per Line: 5 7 5 Premier Contest Hi-Ku (4) Sponsor Brian Strand 8th Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/22/2021 6:59:00 AM

Wow ~ beautiful metaphors

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:44:00 AM

thank you dear friend x

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/3/2021 2:55:00 PM

Perfect...delicate as your heart. Congrats... Pangie xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/7/2021 2:32:00 AM

Awww your words lift my soul ~ thank you. With kindest thoughts and love from Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2020 3:23:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Ann:-) this is so delightful, its a joy to read it again:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2020 4:46:00 AM

Awww thank you Jan for your congrats and sweet words. I was thrilled to get a placement in Brian's premier contest though would so love that little gold cup next to my poem ~ maybe one day... love and hugs Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/29/2020 1:08:00 AM

A lovely image Ann, hope you had a nice Christmas and best wishes for the new year. Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2020 4:43:00 AM

Many thanks Tom, glad you liked it. To be honest I am glad it is all over, as I was on my own, as family were stuck in tier 4 and as you know it is not a good time for me, but I hope you and your family had a great time. Happy New Year to you all. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/28/2020 11:00:00 PM

Lovely entry for the contest. ~~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2020 3:23:00 AM

Thank you very much Victor for your encouraging comment my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2020 5:21:00 PM

Such spectacular imagery Ann an absolute gem:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2020 3:22:00 AM

Oh bless you Jan for your lovely comments. I hope all is well on the island. With kindest thoughts Ann xx