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Her First Time

my niece Bess hangs her head not in shame over her head married too soon macho man 4 month baby overwhelmed where did she go disappeared into motherhood thin as a rail wifedom tail between her legs a young girl who should be singing songs on stages around the world fell for lust and a redhead a burly bossy handsome man whos charm for me was transparant but then I've seen him before and this was her first time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2010 2:18:00 AM
Young Love! ...sometimes it wins. Thank you for sharing your feelings on my “WHAT DOES FRIENDSHIP MEAN TO YOU?” blog. It felt great to read such heartwarming thoughts. Married to your best friend...a super blessing in life. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/10/2010 4:39:00 PM
Funny how a small muscle can overrule the mind. Sad write but very well done.
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