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Her First Recital

girl
twirling
in circles
with a tutu
gal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2009 2:18:00 PM
Nice Lantern, the word "girl" is not centered, that takes away from the poem, nice work, Judy Riley
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