her face I know

she lifts my soul she soothes my mind to see her face woes left behind her pale pink glow her face I know a super moon shines from above fills me with hope fills me with love Written 8th April 2020 Contest Strand Pick 11 Sponsor Brian Strand 2nd Place

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John Watt

Date: 4/24/2020 11:38:00 PM

I know that same face, and stare adoringly, as do you. The moon is a unifier, though we are separated by thousands of miles. We look upon the same face and smile. We know she shall rise again tomorrow, which gives us hope. We remember her past glories which give us happy memories. And we remember those who also looked upon her and have moved on to another place. "Woes left behind". Beautiful.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/26/2020 5:25:00 AM

Fabulous and so true John. Thank you for your welcome visit dear friend. Keep moon watching it is so intoxicating and calming and fills me with pure joy. With kindest thoughts Ann xx thank you for visiting my poems

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/8/2020 5:10:00 PM

Greetings Ann! A lovely verse...so delicate... Please check your Soupmail. Thanks Spring's blessings to you~ Panagiota and Queen Irene

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/8/2020 7:05:00 PM

Bless you dear Panagiota for your lovely words my friend. Yes I will certainly check. With love to you both from Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/7/2020 9:12:00 PM

What a fine tribute to a lovely friend or relative. I hope you are well Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/8/2020 7:03:00 PM

Thank you dear Caren I hope you are well too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx