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Her Essence Ethereal Lanterns

too perfect for this world she's an angel without hurt or pain now the clouds cry as do I soulful laments and heavy helpless tears rain and sun together combine become her essence hugging me

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Date: 4/8/2024 4:26:00 AM
Poignant and touching lanterne well delivered and expressed for the prompt, i love the way youv woven words as always in an evocative nature, sending you light! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/12/2024 12:58:00 PM
This sad poem of deep emotion is written heavy and from the heart. Memories never fade.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/12/2024 1:04:00 PM
Sad reality that we lose people.
Date: 3/12/2024 5:43:00 AM
soft, beautiful, and eloquent Lanterne. Liked 'heavy, helpless tears' and 'her essence hugging me' Your poem expresses how I see my dearly departed mother
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Date: 3/12/2024 8:45:00 AM
You have my sympathy on the the loss of your mother. My mom is 89 and dealing with a very serious health issue. We may lose her. I'm afraid this poem is going to come back and haunt me soon. Blessings to you . Chetta

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