Her Blessings

Reminiscence of what I heard of her They said she is beautiful And of good character In her I soon see The character my mother Was referring to My eyes are widely opened Now I can heartily feel Needless nothing much Than to bring her to mother And seek her blessings
Forms: Kimo, tanka and senyru
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mohammed Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Definately a nicely composed piece.Loved this one from you.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Nice one! is it a future wife?
Oyewole Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:40 AM
I hope she will be. Thanks for caring to ask.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 6:42 AM
I am sure mom will approve.
Oyewole Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:43 AM
Definately. She is always there to support anything that will make me happy and bring me joy.
Chircop Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 5:10 AM
Excellent post..Im glad i stopped by and read it
Oyewole Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Thanks for the visit.
Horsman Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 10:29 AM
wow this is amazing, love all these forms you have used, in fact your poetry just enhances every single one...
Oyewole Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:51 AM
Thanks for your uplifting comment Harry.
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