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Her Blessings

Reminiscence of what I heard of her They said she is beautiful And of good character In her I soon see The character my mother Was referring to My eyes are widely opened Now I can heartily feel Needless nothing much Than to bring her to mother And seek her blessings
Forms: Kimo, tanka and senyru

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/27/2013 4:50:00 AM
Definately a nicely composed piece.Loved this one from you.
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Date: 6/12/2013 2:46:00 PM
Nice one! is it a future wife?
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2013 5:40:00 AM
I hope she will be. Thanks for caring to ask.
Date: 6/12/2013 6:42:00 AM
I am sure mom will approve.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2013 5:43:00 AM
Definately. She is always there to support anything that will make me happy and bring me joy.
Date: 6/12/2013 5:10:00 AM
Excellent post..Im glad i stopped by and read it
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2013 5:47:00 AM
Thanks for the visit.
Date: 6/11/2013 10:29:00 AM
wow this is amazing, love all these forms you have used, in fact your poetry just enhances every single one...
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2013 5:51:00 AM
Thanks for your uplifting comment Harry.

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