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Her Beauty In Winter

I saw her on a cold winter night Her beauty made my heart take to flight The loveliest woman my eyes had ever seen She was my beauty – she was my queen. Her eyes shone like the reflection off of the water Blinding , hypnotic, putting me in a trance All of this at first glance. Her hair flowing in the wind Like the beauty of an eagles wings in flight Covering the sun from my sight. She is a rose blooming in the winter snow How that was possible – I’ll never know. She is the rainbow high in the sky Extending her beauty from one end to another Like the love of a mother. She is like the ocean – deep, dark, mysterious Treacherous and yet calm and can take you Deep into the depths of her soul, where she will keep You and take hold. Her beauty on that cold wintery night Drained me from all my will and my might. Beckoning me to join her in the snow Freezing my heart with nowhere to go. Her hands calling me to come to her side And telling me:” my love is as pure as the white of this snow Can’t you see it, please don’t go “. I walk into the snow with my arms outstretched to her Feeling her love pulling me in like the ocean pulling the sand Taking me deep into a wonderland. FINDING TRUE LOVE AT LAST! © L. RAMS

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Date: 9/5/2013 2:28:00 AM
- A really beautiful poem, Louis .... - Well performed !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:55:00 PM
tthank you ANNE

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