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Her Beauty

Was so carried away by her beauty Yes, physically, but the heart was ugly Now, I feel so empty. Though it was quite a shame, I had to take the blame For it was all about the fame.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/31/2024 7:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 1:01:00 PM

Tangwa Livinus Acha,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/15/2015 10:56:00 PM

Tangwa, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**