Her

soft fiery iced eyes
long black hair flows in the wind 
penetrating me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 31, 2013 at 1:11 PM
wow! WOW! This makes a great senryu as well. Gregory, you are good at both haiku & senryu......... SKAT
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