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......Helter Skelter.......

"Tertium guid...."
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Spending a few moments pondering

The syllogism of existentialism, and

All of the pages of histories

Finds, movements, theories and themes....

The intricities; complexities

Compounds; variables and factors

Real or imagined? 

Proven, and reproven

Or, reasonings and conclusions

Breakthroughs!?

How far we've come

How far we've gone

On and on, and on and on....

Scientifical; anthrolifical; astronomical

Enlightenments, and advancements

Psychological; philosophical

Both, for me and you

That is, if we do, share

The same points of view?

Oh how I love complete silence

Stillness....

The meditation of contemplation

Trying to take hold, of the transitory

And to incise it, into forevers

Monomorphic stone!?....

Standing amid, a quaglistic earthium

Chisms of revisums; revisums, of the isms

Circular conjugation, concoursing

It's configurations....

Unbeknown, toward, a conflagration

Beyond the eyes?

This, schizogenic, schizogenesis

Genesis, of another nature

"Dementia Praecox"....With no eraser!

Gabylon, now in every nation....

Welcome, to, "My View!!!"

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......Helter Skelter.......





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Date: 9/21/2010 8:40:00 AM
Aside of dictionary on lap, a thought provoking muse here, nicely put to poetry and showing us a wickedly contorted imagination perfectly matched and fit for Halloween. Thanks for your kindness of commenting today John, your views ever appreciated - good to see you active! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 9/21/2010 8:40:00 AM
Aside of dictionary on lap, a thought provoking muse here, nicely put to poetry and showing us a wickedly contorted imagination perfectly matched and fit for Halloween. Thanks for your kindness of commenting today John, your views ever appreciated - good to see you active! Anna-Marie.
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:12:00 AM
What does Gabylon mean? I could not find it in the dictionary.
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:47:00 AM
I like this poem...it is very funny when you really think about it... You are very talented John Rhinem, your loving fan, Doris Culverhouse {@_^_@} ------------------------------- ......U..... --------------------------
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:47:00 AM
see mom was right we learn something new each day and was glad to capture this read bet your hands had to hurt getting this all down my friend makes one opens eyes alittle more also thanks for all your kind reviews to my writes too my friend I am battleing the deamon within and not going to let him win as long as my heart can hold out sweet blessings my dear friend to you and family
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:48:00 PM
Though im not in your position,i can read your view and i can understand the feeling which goes deeper than the haloween fun John,i do understand this New Genesis. .Intense!Celene!
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:48:00 AM
Very creative, deep and interesting write, John. enjoyed it.
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Date: 9/7/2010 11:22:00 PM
Very deep, John. Complex thoughts and ideas penned in this one. You chose a great title. Is this truly "your view"? "Helter skelter" indeed. Not sure I got your message but there are some frightening thoughts here that add to the "Halloween spirit." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2010 8:05:00 PM
I absolutely love, love, love this piece. The meter was consistent, the rhymes were creative and well-placed and your use of vocabulary impressive! I particularly enjoyed the bits of humor. Intellectual poetry for the win! (I know, I'm a nerd... but I embrace it.)
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