Help Me

I see me writin on this paper
Prayin for some savior
In aworld so,so godless
And thoughtless
I don't know how we wrought this
All the love that you brought us
It feels like I'm killin myself
Just wheelin myself
Just to pray for some help
I'd give you my heart
And let you just hold it
I'd give you my soul
But I already sold it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Yeager Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 7:09 AM
HollyWood Undead - ( Circles ) one of my fav songs ^.^ i dident know u listioned to them there realy good i also like there song No'5 hehe....(( i'd give you my heart and i'd let you just hold it i'd give you my soul but i allready sold it on that day the day i walk away in december i will allways remember ill regret it forever. I remember brown eyes so sad in blue skys turn to darkness and night im so sick of the fight...)) LoL like my fav part of that song
Kane Jr. Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 1:10 PM
this is a really good poem. a lot of yours could be songs almost i think. id like to see what your writing looks like when you find what your looking for.
Mcmorrow Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 12:09 PM
im not mad at you stop getting so defensive
Romero Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 5:31 AM
Let go...your mind,your heart, even your soul let go...let the pain subside find that child who laughs and holds on inside and let it out how we travil on this journey is better without so much unwanted pain, let go... the rest of the way should find you in the sun laughing and having fun. hold on and keep on writing on.
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