Victoria Anderson-Throop Poet Rhyme

Help From An Old Lover Rondolet For Contest

Help from an Old Lover            

                                                    His outstretched hand
                                              was just beyond her slipp'ry reach.
                                                    His outstretched hand
                                          was gentler than her heart could stand
                                           now--his tender gaze autumn’s peach
                                    breeze-kissed . She grasped-- no need of speech--   
                                                     his outstretched hand.








Victoria Anderson-Throop
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12/8/12

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Poet Destroyer A December 19, 2012 at 10:10 PM Victoria, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 15, 2012 at 5:16 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Victoria love xx

Debbie Guzzi December 14, 2012 at 3:15 PM Just wonderful, affecting content & great use of line breaks for emphasis! Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love