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They need our help as they usually yelp Why won't we just stop and think Instead of sitting having a strong drink They're in desperate need We can't just leave them for them to bleed Aren't we suppose to treat each other the same That is our main aim They are not invisible, just visible So why are we so divisible We've got to be; work as one If we do, our co-operation would be as big as the sun Most are dying, as well as crying eyeing us with prying eyes Others may starve to death with nothing to say because they're out of breath Why let them suffer just to make yourself seem tougher Why do we ignore each other Would you rather go further or would you take notice of your brothers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 8:49:00 AM
This is inspiring :)
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:30:00 PM
Nice creative and thought provoking write, Nazie
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nazie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:39:00 AM
really nice poem u make a lot of good points luv*Skat
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Date: 5/30/2011 9:10:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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