Hells' Gate

Cuts my wrists to make me bleed;
Take this life away from me.
Eyes stitched wide open,
I'm forced to see,
See what this world has come to be.
I don't want to live,
But it's impossible to die,
I can never blink,
Therefore I always cry.
I'm nearing that side now,
Nearing that side of fate;
I'm getting closer,
Closer to Hells' gate.
As I peer through the fences,
What is it I see?
The depths of burning fire,
Coming fast towards me.
Fury in his eyes as he swung open the doors,
He had me on the ground, begging on all fours.
Begging to be free,
Free from such horror,
Sitting there in terror,
Waiting for his order.
With a stroke of his goatee,
And a wave of his giant hand,
He sent me back to where I came from,
Back to my homeland.
I once thought here it was pain,
But I was very wrong,
For the pain I felt there was worse,
Far more strong.
I lay there in my bed,
Razor in my palm;
I drop it to the ground,
And suddenly feel calm.
I lay there to reminisce the better times I had,
The worse thoughts go away,
As I then become glad.
Glad to still be here in this house that I call home,
Glad to be here instead of feeling so alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/27/2013 7:40:00 PM
jenn :( dont feel alone you know iv always been here for you just text me
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:03:00 PM
Jenn, your poem was very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/1/2013 9:26:00 AM
A very good write Jenn, You describe these feelings well. Welcome to poetry soup, hope to read more from you. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/29/2013 5:08:00 AM
Hello Jenn, thank you for your choice to share your poem here with us. - You write very well, a sad poem - Welcome to P-Soup, give to get back comment - have fun with writing, reading and making friends here with us. - Many skilled "poets" the basis of many different countries. - Wishing you good luck! - Have a nice day. - See you again. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/28/2013 10:19:00 PM
The pain and emotions are deep Jenn "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:53:00 PM
I have known such pain Jenn; Moved away from it , always away. I have lived in one moment and then the next. Saying I will be happy in this moment because I can. Write more Jenn and move away from the pain because you can. Write more and the more you write the better your writing will be. Please write more so I can read it.
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