Janice Canerdy Poet Monoku

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placed 1st in Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem Contest no. 76, November 18, 2023

 

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Hello--Goodbye

The heartbreaker says hello seductively--goodbye dismissively.


Date: December 20, 2018
Contest Title: One Liner--Hello and Goodbye 
Sponsor: Silent One               Placed 2nd

March 22, 2019, entered in Brian Strand's Late March 2019 Contest

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 24, 2018 at 4:56 AM - Congratulations, Janice :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Janice Canerdy December 24, 2018 at 11:14 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2018 at 8:34 AM wow, love this one. Congrats on your win. Janice Canerdy December 23, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

Gregory Richard Barden December 22, 2018 at 6:10 PM So much wisdom here - love it! Congrats, my friend! :-) Janice Canerdy December 22, 2018 at 7:57 PM Thanks so much, Greg! Janice

Heidi Sands December 22, 2018 at 1:26 PM Congratulations for your win :) Janice Canerdy December 22, 2018 at 7:57 PM Thanks so much, Heidi! Janice

Carolyn Devonshire December 22, 2018 at 10:41 AM Ooh, I love this one, Janice. Congratulations on your great win in the one-liner contest! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn Janice Canerdy December 22, 2018 at 12:12 PM Thanks so much, Carolyn! Janice

Alexis Y. December 22, 2018 at 9:46 AM Hi Janice, Good one-liner that rings of truth. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Janice Canerdy December 22, 2018 at 12:13 PM Thanks so much, Alexis! Janice

Silent One December 22, 2018 at 9:12 AM Oh those manipulative ones.. Always have to be careful with false words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Janice Canerdy December 22, 2018 at 12:14 PM S.O., THANK YOU so much for placing my poem! Janice

Susan Ashley December 21, 2018 at 10:40 AM Wow! I admire the pithy point of your poetic pen, Janice. Concise yet so very expressive. A gem! Best wishes for a win and warmest holiday wishes for you.. ~Susan Janice Canerdy December 22, 2018 at 7:11 AM Thanks so much, Susan! Merry Christmas! Janice

Wendy Watson December 21, 2018 at 6:25 AM A very potent message in so few words. Very clever, Janice. Janice Canerdy December 21, 2018 at 6:48 AM Thanks so much, Wendy! Janice

Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 6:23 AM Very clever, Janice. Janice Canerdy December 21, 2018 at 6:49 AM Thanks so much, Line! Janice

Jennifer Proxenos December 20, 2018 at 11:43 PM What a seasoned heartbreaker this sounds like, and he/she seem well practised! An Excellent one liner, well done Janice. Hugs, Good Luck! Jennifer. Janice Canerdy December 21, 2018 at 6:50 AM Thank you so much, Jennifer! Janice