Hello Hate

hello hate say i say sayd hello hate contemplatory emotional tags these sites drag lips womb walls are stretched my eyes have been sifted through sculptors beyond castles dreams clouds lines with the very thought of me clones they come bulging from sulfur fingertips wagging chalkboard remarks shreal eclipses eardrums as fingernails ring painted beyond my sobriety are rainbowed sheets each one of them we breathe colours are less than me so bright less than me word bathers seek me thoughts are bound on spools my thoughts are bound on spools sprockets from lost generations cling to me cling to each open space between my ears love can be found in these moments love can be found ing these moments love can be found they make hello hate ?

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Date: 12/14/2017 9:09:00 AM
"my thoughts are bound on spools" I feel stuck sometimes with my words but I never thought of it like that. Creative. I hope you can find love and not hate!
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Date: 12/14/2017 1:36:00 PM
"she cut me right back down to size" sleep the day let it fade" "who was there to take your place" "no one knows never will" "mostly you and mostly me" "what do you say what do you do" "when it all comes down" "I don't wanna come back down from this cloud" "it's taken me all this time to find out what I need" ... uhm ... then the song title ... yeah ... perhaps ima swim away ...
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