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L Milton Hankins

Hello - Goodbye

Hello
Welcome, warm
Greeting, saluting, hailing
Salutation, address; farewell, toodle-loo
Parting, tearing, leave-taking
Sad, departure
Goodbye


May 22, 2021

Copyright © L Milton Hankins | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

May 25, 2021 at 1:19 PM

Lovely diamante; you really nailed this art form Hank.

May 22, 2021 at 8:45 PM

Toodle-loo and ta-ta! ~ Ciao, Alan Sherman

L Milton Hankins

May 22, 2021 at 9:35 PM

Yep. Thanks, Gershon. Good nite!

May 22, 2021 at 3:12 PM

Love the toodle-loo!

L Milton Hankins

May 22, 2021 at 7:31 PM

Thanks, Kim. It seems to have attracted some attention! Toodle-Loo!

May 22, 2021 at 2:48 PM

Hi L. Milton, You make this form look so easy. I only wrote one. Good rhythm and flow. Great job:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 22, 2021 at 11:34 AM

Hello Milton, I like the way all the words flow together. Yep! I remember the word Toodle -loo. Yes it is an oldie. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 22, 2021 at 12:05 PM

Hello Milton, your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day .

L Milton Hankins

May 22, 2021 at 11:54 AM

Thanks so much, Darlene.

May 22, 2021 at 10:22 AM

Very creative Milton, love the contrast between the two. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom

L Milton Hankins

May 22, 2021 at 10:44 AM

Thank you, Tom. Same to you. I appreciated your visit.

May 22, 2021 at 10:20 AM

Toodle-loo?

May 23, 2021 at 11:48 AM

I know toodle-oo, but to the 'loo?

L Milton Hankins

May 22, 2021 at 10:44 AM

Yep, it's an oldie!

May 22, 2021 at 10:23 AM

Lol Rico, haven't heard that in a long while.

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