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Hello Goodbye

sweet hummingbird looking at me in a wink hello goodbye AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on December 21, 2018 for contest ONE LINER - HELLO AND GOODBYE sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/27/2018 11:02:00 PM

goodbye to this contest, hello to your win! Love this one :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/28/2018 6:35:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2018 4:54:00 AM

- Congratulations, Line :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/24/2018 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Dm Babbit

Date: 12/23/2018 10:04:00 AM

too quick but what a moment, congrats on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/23/2018 3:42:00 PM

LOL thanks, DM.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2018 8:47:00 AM

oh yes, this is SO true. Love it!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/23/2018 3:43:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/22/2018 9:38:00 PM

Cute! Picture-perfect image. Congrats on your win in the contest, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2018 10:59:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/22/2018 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations for your win! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/22/2018 10:33:00 AM

What a sweet image, Line. Congratulations on your great win in the one-liner contest! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2018 5:58:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Carolyn.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/22/2018 9:31:00 AM

Hi Line, Great one-liner with stunning imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2018 5:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis. Most appreciated.

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2018 9:05:00 AM

Sounds sweet Line... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2018 6:02:00 PM

Thanks, SO, for the fun contest and my placement.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/21/2018 9:38:00 AM

I love hummingbirds, although I used to get a lot of bee stings as a child, trying to catch them. One of my favorite local restaurants has a porch where you can eat and watch the hummingbirds and finches. Love the poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/21/2018 10:31:00 AM

What an awesome idea - I've never seen a restaurant where they do that. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Wendy Watson

Date: 12/21/2018 8:28:00 AM

A clever idea,Line. I don't suppose I'll ever see one in real life but snippets of film tie in perfectly with your allusion to their ephemeral presence.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/21/2018 8:47:00 AM

How sad, Wendy... maybe on a trip or at a zoo with a bird section?

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/21/2018 6:54:00 AM

Excellent, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/21/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Janice.