Line Gauthier Poet Monoku

Hello Goodbye

sweet hummingbird looking at me in a wink hello goodbye



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on December 21, 2018 for contest ONE LINER - HELLO AND GOODBYE sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 2ND

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Timothy Mcguire December 27, 2018 at 11:02 PM goodbye to this contest, hello to your win! Love this one :) Line Gauthier December 28, 2018 at 6:35 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 24, 2018 at 4:54 AM - Congratulations, Line :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier December 24, 2018 at 11:10 AM Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

DM Babbit December 23, 2018 at 10:04 AM too quick but what a moment, congrats on your win. Line Gauthier December 23, 2018 at 3:42 PM LOL thanks, DM.

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2018 at 8:47 AM oh yes, this is SO true. Love it!! Line Gauthier December 23, 2018 at 3:43 PM Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf December 22, 2018 at 9:38 PM Cute! Picture-perfect image. Congrats on your win in the contest, Line! :) gw Line Gauthier December 22, 2018 at 10:59 PM Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Heidi Sands December 22, 2018 at 1:23 PM Congratulations for your win! :) Line Gauthier December 22, 2018 at 5:57 PM Thanks, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Carolyn Devonshire December 22, 2018 at 10:33 AM What a sweet image, Line. Congratulations on your great win in the one-liner contest! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn Line Gauthier December 22, 2018 at 5:58 PM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Carolyn.

Alexis Y. December 22, 2018 at 9:31 AM Hi Line, Great one-liner with stunning imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis Line Gauthier December 22, 2018 at 5:59 PM Thank you so much, Alexis. Most appreciated.

Silent One December 22, 2018 at 9:05 AM Sounds sweet Line... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Line Gauthier December 22, 2018 at 6:02 PM Thanks, SO, for the fun contest and my placement.

M. L. Kiser December 21, 2018 at 9:38 AM I love hummingbirds, although I used to get a lot of bee stings as a child, trying to catch them. One of my favorite local restaurants has a porch where you can eat and watch the hummingbirds and finches. Love the poem. Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 10:31 AM What an awesome idea - I've never seen a restaurant where they do that. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Wendy Watson December 21, 2018 at 8:28 AM A clever idea,Line. I don't suppose I'll ever see one in real life but snippets of film tie in perfectly with your allusion to their ephemeral presence. Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 8:47 AM How sad, Wendy... maybe on a trip or at a zoo with a bird section?

Janice Canerdy December 21, 2018 at 6:54 AM Excellent, Line! Janice Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 7:14 AM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Janice.