Hello Goodbye

walked in said hello walked out said goodbye you wonder why



One Liner - Hello and Goodbye Poetry Contest
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12/20/18
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Ashley Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Oh, to be the proverbial fly on the wall, Timothy. I love the pithy spirit of your provocative monoku. Best wishes for a win and warmest holiday wishes for you.. ~Susan
Mcguire Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 3:24 PM
You are right Susan, I wonder what he saw when he walked it! ;0 Many well wishes to you and yours.
Gauthier Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:19 PM
Love it. Short and sweet.
Mcguire Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Miss Line
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