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A glance across a room a smile is enough to get it going. A new relationship is born Without you even knowing. Coffee at the mall Or lunch in a restaurant. Two strangers becoming friends Both acting nonchalant. The days turn into weeks The weeks turn into years. You share your deepest secrets The laughter, and the tears. Then one day you look across the table at that empty stare. You hear your loved one tell you, that they no longer care. You thought this one was different You thought this one would last. You thought this one was stronger, than relationships in the past. You want to ask those questions The who? what? Why? When? Where? But you know that it's all over You can't make a person care. The room................... (Pause) Is suddenly quiet. <<< Cal Bambi "The word artist"©riginal >>> I paint pictures with words calbambi@gmail.com

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Date: 5/11/2022 7:55:00 AM
Union and separation ~ name of the dance of life. Enjoyed the read, Bambi
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Date: 7/28/2019 6:15:00 PM
Hello Cal Bambi, yes I do like this poem. Did this happen to you? Some marriages do not last long. Some last longer. Have a nice evening my friend.
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