Hello and Goodbye

I hollered hello - curiously the mountain echoed goodbye!

Entry for Silent One's "One Liner - Hello Goodbye" Contest
20 December 2018
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Andresen Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 4:55 AM
- Congratulations, Bob :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 8:49 AM
this one was one of my very favorites. Congrats. It was good seeing it again as I go through the winner list
Wolf Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:48 PM
This one just hits the spot. Visual---and felt. Echoes so true. Many congrats on your win in the contest, Bob! Season's best, Gershon
Hinshaw Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Gershon for your many kind comments re some of my stuff and congrats once again for your well-deserved win in the contest. Best to you and yours during this wonderful Season - Bob
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Love it! Congratulations for your win ! :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Oh, this one is different and thought-provoking, Bob. Congratulations on your great win in the one-liner contest! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn PS-Hope you'll check out my old or new limerick contest.
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:45 AM
congratulations on your win.. This is indeed very beautiful and you deserve it. Merry christmas my friend and happy new year
Y. Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Hi Robert, I really enjoyed your funny and clever one-liner. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis
One Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:08 AM
This one made me smile Bob... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Hinshaw Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Thank, you, S.O. for considering it worthy of a win. Looking forward to participating in other contests you may sponsor. I wish for you and your family a joyous Christmas Celebration - Bob
Rushing Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 10:16 AM
I like this one liner Robert good luck on the contest and have a Merry Christmas
Vaso Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Now that's original!!! :)
Hinshaw Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Thank you, Arthur. Its kinda silly but I guess we all need a chuckle these days. Merry Christmas, my friend, to you and your family. Bob
Gauthier Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Awesome! Fabulous poem, Robert. Love it.
Hinshaw Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:32 PM
Thanks line - glad you like it. Bob
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Oh how FUN!!!!
Hinshaw Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:31 PM
I guess my hello got garbled some where along the line - ha! Thanks for stopping by - Bob
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