Hell Subtle

Little hell earth is taking its toll, we suffer in silence the hell that we hold, till we escape in the blinding white light, the death tunnel is bright, where we Get a fresh start so im told ...don I did 15 years in stupidity, at 15 a kick in the head from a horse dumbed me down, i surfaced at 30 and the fog lifted, but stupidity returns some times...
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Makama Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
Whatley Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Aha, great message behind this write, Don!
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