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Hell having child none

New born cute, cuddly, chubby, baby boy GrandParents joy, siblings live toy, Divine bundle of joy Mom feeding baby with closed eyes Baby chores, joy touching new highs Baby innocence without whys Dumb Angel spreading joy Closed fist's secret way Childs innocent cute smile Lips wide open all while Adorable Universal style Naughty childish mischiefs and deeds Smile dilutes anger indeed Never revenge breeds Forgiveness to all Childs joy mantra to all Child Gods best peace mascot ever Satan failed to instill fear Even devil child can cheer Play with child best relaxation No need of manipulation Bliss like meditation Child filling Heaven Hell having child none ( Entry for Member's Contest - Focus on Syllables by Catie Lindsay)

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Date: 10/17/2010 9:35:00 PM
@Sara - thnx for nice comments..... Luv/best wishes always...... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/17/2010 1:41:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the comments on my work...Sara
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Date: 10/16/2010 2:52:00 AM
@charles - thnx for nice comments & good luck for contest.... Luv/Best wishes always ...Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:46:00 PM
good luck with this tremendous poem. It should do well in the contest. charles
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