Randy Johnson Poet Rhyme

Hell Damnation

I killed two men but I never tried to get forgiveness from the Lord.
When I died, I soon learned that Heaven was not my reward.
I'm in Hell and the fire is burning my skin.
This is a predicament that I got myself in.
This agonizing pain is too much for me to take.
I'm here in Hell because I made some big mistakes.
This fire is way hotter than any fire on Earth.
I should've realized what life in Heaven would've been worth.
The flames are six feet high, I feel like I'm going to be consumed.
Please don't live your life the way I did or you too will be doomed.

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Deb Wilson September 18, 2010 at 7:40 PM This is a scary thought to burn in Hell..well written..puts the fear in you for sure..Take care~Deb

Katherine Stella September 18, 2010 at 11:27 AM boy been awhile since seeing your works posted and I love it as before right to point me counting my blessings for me does not enjoy the view from hell been there done that now onward and upward great write and read keep on penning

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2010 at 11:01 AM oi! oi! oi!, Sorry that is my expression to your poem. I never thought i would read a poem that does not offer heaven as a reward. You Randy, have dammed my images to wow! wow!.. Not much when it comes to words. I really like this poem and the ending is a powerful message. Adding this to my favorite poems,..p.d.