Hell

In this pit of utter darkness
The day doesn't see the light
Encompassed by my agony
To my captors, joyous delight

Surrounded by constant weeping
And the sounds of grinding teeth
Their cries for mercy go unheard
With no hope for any relief

The living dead is what we're called
For there's no one here deceased
This torment will last forever
And the torture will only increase

Time here has no meaning
In this prison cell of sorrows
Forgiveness, now an illusion
No hope for more tomorrows

Hope is now a foreign word
Only spoken under our breath
Compassion here is futile
We can't even pray for death

Our sins have been recorded
And play back in our head
With our chances for forgiveness
But we still chose this, instead

This place is called, "Eternity"
Forever here, we'll dwell
Others say "The bottomless pit"
But this is simply Hell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Happy Easter to you and yours Larry. Love Carol and Family
Roberts Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 10:20 PM
Edgar Allen Poe would love this one, very good, very dark
Teske Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 5:35 PM
i like it very much it reminds me of the worst kinda day your having and have no hope left because hell is already in your head
Taylor Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Kinda eerie but well done. Good job,Larry.
Mckenzie Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Larry~ A real good poem here about life's pit. I love the movement and rhythm in this poem well done! Laura :) Happy Easter!
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