Hell

Is there anytime to live without expectation?
Is there any place to live without regulation?
to be one self with out loss of self,
may not appear in a world to disappear,
hell shall hold a special place for me,
cause even the blind can stop to see,
I'm just as bad as anyone can be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/9/2009 10:18:00 AM
I like this write. Its very thought provoking. You can be just as bad as anyone can be.. and anyone can be just as bad as you. But the question is... do you become as bad as you are capable of being? also, there's another place other than hell you can live by without expectation and regulations.. just go to the jungle and live among animals :) expectation and regulation are just human creation made with morals. I enjoyed the read. take care.
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:06:00 AM
On the contrary. Hell is only for the ignorant. Pls reshape blissfull poetry since you know ryhming.
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:33:00 AM
I like this Dennis. Ive got to wonder what it is you have done, is it so bad or are you punishing yourself when you might not need to.
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:15:00 AM
Hey Denis, this is a thought provoking poem, we all need to beware of how wwe live our life so that we may avoid the danger of hell. You are such a talented poet. Please stop being a bad person. I love your writing skill. Keep writing and welcome, change the poetry form to free verse. take care
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Date: 6/9/2009 4:39:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Dennis. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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