Helium Balloons

Helium balloons may last
Well past when they're inflated,
Although longevity like that
Is vastly overrated.

For who needs "Welcome Baby" ones
When yours is two years old;
And most "Congratulations" 
After weeks start growing cold.

Balloons fulfill their duties well
But often they will pop;
With helium, however,
All those greetings never stop.

Yet there's one way to tell
If a balloon should bite the dust - 
When it's puckered, loose and droopy,
Then its message you can't trust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Duggan Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 10:26 PM
Oh Ilene I do like this one,mind you I haven't really come across any of yours I don't like, you are a very good poet and you make everything rhyme which is what I love, to me that is poetry, loved it take care my friend........Vera.............
Hicks Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:58 AM
So many thoughts going on in this piece. For some reason the first stanza felt like an allegory for when you grow older you also grow fatter. Could be wrong though... ha ha ha. "All those greetings never stop." it makes me think that you shouldn't dwell on past events and look ahead, move on. And then your last stanza leaves room for reflection - very well written.
Bauer Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:16 PM
wow, timothy! it's amazing to me what other people can get from the poems we write - i love hearing other interpretations. thank you for reading and thinking about what i wrote...
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Just let one go in memory of my sister Robyn on this day, her birthday. It is stuck up in the neighbors tree. :) I'll be looking at that one for awhile. :) Peace. :)
Bauer Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:14 PM
this is a poignant comment, robert. i'm sorry for the loss of your sister and i think it's a lovely tradition to let a balloon go on her birthday...
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