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Held With Grace

A sycamore tree is history held with grace, Like our friendship, Our anchor of friendship is the anchor to each others soul. Friendship is for keeps all it takes is a little patience to make it work. Our friendship is history in the making, We've been there for each other through so much. Like a quilt of hearts with some holes, As that's when you needed me most in your life. We were two souls born apart, And now exist as two sisters by heart.

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Mary Duhart

Date: 3/10/2009 6:14:00 AM

Very beautifully done. Message conveyed nicely. Continue to share.

Denis Joe

Date: 3/6/2009 1:12:00 PM

I like the way that this poem expresses a simple, though universal, theme in such a delicate and precise manner. The language is great and it is hard to pinpoint a particular moment in this, though I love the idea of 'Our friendship is history in the making' a brilliant way of expressing it. I wonder if you could not have made this an heroic couplet and do something to make the first stanza a couplet. It works brilliants on that level, I feel.