Held Hostage

I was held hostage by your beauty
Looked you in the eyes face down 
Contemplating the possibilities to
Make you my royal Victoria or my princess even
Running around hand in hand in thee garden of Eden eve...
Sharing on point pointless stories 
As if we on the verge of opening a love bookshop...

Alone in my God given temple
I be exaggerating the exactitude of a golden
Chess board consisting of a queen and a black king me..
Cross examining the chances of a wonder tale in writing 
Minding, thinking emotions riding a golden loop
Zoom look the idea of a broken fixed puzzle
Mind and heart desires you my Juliet 
But I Romeo the Pit bull is still having my mouth guard with a muzzle 
Its a prescribed precaution...

I dwell with you in my mental inn-casement mostly 
Living in paradise existing in freestyle
What are the chances of speaking French soundless with lips
Enjoying the silence of both with chemistry apocalypse...
But all can be a fairytale that lives but cannot exist 
In a blink of an eye I saw something
That is nothing but what might be reality

Identify...
She does not share a mutual feeling with an old
Like my kind, its pretty much two possibilities 
(Is the sky blue or bluish... Vision it!!!)
That lie in my conscious mind, but ignorance
Lifting up my spirit in my subconscious mind
Examine the elements of surprise, `love her in disguise`
Illuminate her face in your mind `let the feelings die inside`


Painting thoughts on paper
By Dizak

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/20/2016 8:20:00 PM
KELEBOQILE, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 1/30/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you 2018 times :)
Date: 8/4/2014 4:33:00 PM
Wow this is just striking! I was taken away by the way you choose to use your words I think it is very creative and overall I think this is an excellent poem.
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Date: 1/30/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Lindo
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