Hedgehog Wanted a Unique Canoe

Hedgehog did not want an ordinary plain willow or birch canoe.
She was a flashy brassy hedgehog; she wanted something new.
She told everyone she saw that she would be putting leaves together.
A new, lightweight canoe that would float in all kinds of weather.

Her relatives scoffed, her neighbors laughed. They told her it was silly.
She incorporated the help of her wizard cousin, Little Robotics Billy.
He spent a day eating all the brownies in her house, while he created.
A fancy leaf canoe, that was better than anything she had anticipated.

So now she floats around the pond in the fanciest canoe on the water.
Parents are finally proud of her. “There goes are brilliant daughter!”
Hedgehog has begged Billy to not make any more canoes like hers.
"Okay, as long as you keep me in brownies,” he often purrs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kiser Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 4:23 PM
I guess Hedgehog had the last laugh; her canoe was great!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 8:45 PM
She had no brownies, but what the heck.
Hankins Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 8:02 PM
(still chuckling) So, bring on the brownies, and she'll get anything she wants, right? I can understand that.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 12:22 AM
I think so. I found a mistake in this poem after you read it. Participated should have been anticipated. I have corrected it now.
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