Hedge Laying

Chop, chop, crack, snap
Pull the stem firmly back,
Bend and twist, fold and weave, Then step back, admire, and leave.
Moving slowly along the line,
Fix recalcitrant boughs with twine, contemplative work and gentle strain, Ease the mind and calm the brain.
The birds fly down as if to see, What goes on, between tree and me. No mechanical trimmer here, thrashing twigs and hewing clear.
Working with the natural form,
with ancient tools, gnarled and worn. There is for me no better way,
to spend a bright cold winters day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Storrier Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Brilliant, loved it thank you :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 2:23 AM
The verbs in the first line pull you into this poem so fast! What a great beginning. Trashing twigs, gnarled tools, terrific words.
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 3:08 PM
You are at one with nature in this descriptive poem:-) thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:18 PM
Love those action verbs in the first lines of he poem. So much better than mushy adjectives. You've got the knack, sir. Write more for us! Best wishes, Gershon
One Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:37 AM
Another nice farming poem.. A poet farmer, how cool..
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