Heddy the Hummingbird Queen

Heddy, the eight-year-old hummingbird queen.
Often hiding out, rarely fully seen
Loves her hummingbirds more than the human race.
Her messy golden amber curls, rarely in place.

Her hazel eyes, giant orbs, that see more than they should.
She protects her hummingbirds as only a good mother would.
She is their go-to-place, their refuge from the ugliness in the world.
They love this angel, with her wild hair never fully curled. 

Heddy, the eight-year-old hummingbird queen
Readily feels a human person's mean.
Has lips of the lightest pink, full of purity.
Being among hummingbirds, is her security.

She gives them wonderment, she gives them hope.
She is their rock, their heroine, their uphill slope.
Hummingbirds are flocking in now from forest and sea.
Being with her is where they all want to be!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 7/3/2019 6:28:00 PM
What a loving heart, 8 year old Heddy has. Not talking about her love of hummingbirds, she shows and lives her love of hummingbirds. Hail Queen Heddy! I love this one, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/3/2019 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I am a hummingbird lover from way back!
Date: 6/24/2019 8:10:00 AM
Caren, I love hummingbirds...have a tatoo as they are my animal totem. I would love to meet this Heddy. She sounds so wonderful. Wonderful write.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 10:02:00 AM
She is wonderful, which is why she has bewitched and amazed the hummingbirds. Thanks for your stop by, my friend.
Date: 6/4/2019 2:51:00 PM
hello Caren, love this poem and i love the humming birds. So tiny they move so fast. They are beautiful little birds. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2019 5:26:00 PM
I have a hernia a hihates hernia and it bothers me every day.. I feel it more at night when i sleep. It is like a rock on top of me. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/4/2019 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. I was standing looking at my hummingbird feeders yesterday and I thought, "I wish a hummingbird would come up right now." A few seconds later, one did. I think God is feeling bad about my shingles.
Date: 6/4/2019 1:44:00 PM
I'm not a hummingbird but Heddy is my queen too. And fave)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/4/2019 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Kurt. I like her a lot!
Date: 6/3/2019 6:11:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, my friend! A fave!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/3/2019 11:04:00 PM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate it
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