Heavy Rain

In the early morning I wake up
And start walking on the road to top

Beyond the summit
I don't know there's a valley to fall
Or there's a sun, like a cheerful ball

I go on and see
Instead of lightening the air
The night looks like will be forever

The pavement has a lot of cracks
Maybe it cross's my heart's tracks
Hopelessness arising
Waiting for not arriving
Then tears are falling into the fractures
Oh I'm even guilty about pavement rupture

I need heavy rain
To wash out my mind
I need heavy rain
To sweep the road

On the highest point you can see
How dark clouds embrace me
So I release me into the valley

Heavy rain, heavy rain, please embrace me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/18/2015 1:01:00 AM
I like the rain too. Nicely done
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Naghmeh Heidari
Date: 2/13/2017 3:11:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/5/2015 9:29:00 PM
Naghmeh, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Naghmeh Heidari
Date: 12/6/2015 5:47:00 AM
Hi SKAT, I'm so glad to hear that. Thank you @}--
Date: 4/30/2015 3:04:00 PM
- A lovely and touching poem, I like it Naqhmeh - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Naghmeh Heidari
Date: 5/2/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Anne @}-- hugs
Date: 4/26/2015 3:27:00 PM
Nice Do you know hindi, then u can hv a look at my creation.
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Naghmeh Heidari
Date: 4/27/2015 1:26:00 AM
Thanks dear. No I don't know Hindi, I'm Persian, but these languages have similar words.
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