Heavy Rain

In the early morning I wake up
And start walking on the road to top

Beyond the summit
I don't know there's a valley to fall
Or there's a sun, like a cheerful ball

I go on and see
Instead of lightening the air
The night looks like will be forever

The pavement has a lot of cracks
Maybe it cross's my heart's tracks
Hopelessness arising
Waiting for not arriving
Then tears are falling into the fractures
Oh I'm even guilty about pavement rupture

I need heavy rain
To wash out my mind
I need heavy rain
To sweep the road

On the highest point you can see
How dark clouds embrace me
So I release me into the valley

Heavy rain, heavy rain, please embrace me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Salehi Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 1:01 AM
I like the rain too. Nicely done
Heidari Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 3:11 AM
Thank you
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Naghmeh, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Heidari Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 5:47 AM
Hi SKAT, I'm so glad to hear that. Thank you @}--
Andresen Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 3:04 PM
- A lovely and touching poem, I like it Naqhmeh - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Heidari Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Anne @}-- hugs
Soni Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Nice Do you know hindi, then u can hv a look at my creation.
Heidari Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:26 AM
Thanks dear. No I don't know Hindi, I'm Persian, but these languages have similar words.
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