Heavy is this weight

Heavy is this weight, a feeling I must keep, I swallow hard, and force it down inside Counting the cracks while trying my best to sleep, Across the ceiling, theres nowhere left to hide Deep lines have grown, a map of painful pride, I've never seen them stretch so far and deep Each perfect thing, I scrutinize should I confide, And find the fault that my watchful eyes will keep I know the words, the actions I could take, To show the strength I hide within my breast I know the climb, the promise I could make, To rise above, and put myself to the test But this knowledge waits; a seed within the shell, To flower, to bloom, too lift me from this hell—
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November 3, 2025 at 9:25 PM
"I scrutinize should I confid" confide* just helping out....this is a rawly beautiful poem, A.S.
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November 3, 2025 at 10:23 PM
A leason, learn to proof read before posting a late nights thoughts ;p lol. Thanks Paige :) A.S.
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