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Heavy Hearts

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Heavy hearts, ripped apart, lie scattered, splattered. Fledgling feelings failed to bring blossom blooms. Longing love left lingering on the vine, fraught fruit, wrinkling withered. No noble rot renders, to save savor in wasted wine. Fate faded, flame flicked down to off.

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Date: 5/1/2023 1:25:00 PM
excellent alliteration John, good luck in the contest. i am trying to think of a theme and hope my muse comes out to play:-) hugs Jan xx
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