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Whilst hot tears washed away the signs of the pain, he couldn't stop crying, and his heart quivered.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/22/2021 12:52:00 PM

Touching, Lasaad ~

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/22/2021 1:39:00 PM

Thanks, dear Line, your comment is so much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2021 11:56:00 AM

Poigant lines put with this gorgeous picture.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/18/2021 12:16:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and kind comment, Andrea.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/18/2021 6:24:00 AM

Yes indeed Lasaad, just because the tears stop, does not mean, that the agony has abated, so much sorrow continues on unseen, wonderful raw monoku, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/18/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting, David, so much appreciated, blessings and best regards

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/18/2021 4:39:00 AM

A true statement, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Unfortunately, the aftereffects of a painful experience may last for a lifetime. Excellently written. Blessings

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/18/2021 4:50:00 AM

Dearest friend, Demetrios, thanks for your great visit, and what you mention is true; agony is not a short-time sensation.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/17/2021 7:38:00 PM

So beautifully imagined, Lasaad. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/17/2021 7:46:00 PM

Thanks, Evelyn, for the nice comment. Blessings and regards

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2021 7:04:00 PM

aw ~ a very touching poem, Lasaad

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/17/2021 7:11:00 PM

Thanks, Line; I appreciate your kind comment; have a great night.