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Heavy Heart

Whilst hot tears washed away the signs of the pain,
 
            he couldn't stop crying, and his heart quivered.

heartpainmonoku

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Line Gauthier

May 22, 2021 at 12:52 PM

Touching, Lasaad ~

Sotto Poet

May 22, 2021 at 1:39 PM

Thanks, dear Line, your comment is so much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

May 18, 2021 at 11:56 AM

Poigant lines put with this gorgeous picture.

Sotto Poet

May 18, 2021 at 12:16 PM

Thanks for your visit and kind comment, Andrea.

David Kavanagh

May 18, 2021 at 6:24 AM

Yes indeed Lasaad, just because the tears stop, does not mean, that the agony has abated, so much sorrow continues on unseen, wonderful raw monoku, cheers David

Sotto Poet

May 18, 2021 at 11:09 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting, David, so much appreciated, blessings and best regards

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 18, 2021 at 4:39 AM

A true statement, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Unfortunately, the aftereffects of a painful experience may last for a lifetime. Excellently written. Blessings

Sotto Poet

May 18, 2021 at 4:50 AM

Dearest friend, Demetrios, thanks for your great visit, and what you mention is true; agony is not a short-time sensation.