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Heavy Dew

There's a heavy dew 'pon the ground A gift from last nights rain Then I saw the path whence was made By an animal plain Then I saw another path, too They both came from the road Then they converged in the front yard Together was their mode Two deer_a mother and her fawn A youth of this years birth Will it live to follow the path By ancestors of earth Deer were here then wiped out by man Lyme disease disappeared Gone with deer whose ticks spread it round Now both are back uncleared There's good_ bad in most everything Now the garden fenced round But the deer's beauty is enjoyed All the year most profound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/19/2012 12:03:00 PM
Have to have a fence then Sarah.. mind those deer can jump though love the nature aspect here..
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:59:00 AM
lovely piece, my friend. There used to be a family of deer in the woods near us - just beautiful to see. I've heard of the disease caused by deer ticks over here
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Date: 8/18/2012 8:07:00 PM
I'm extremely glad to read your poems this Sunday morning, Sara. They are awesome breakfast for me with coffee and biscuits. ( with all my smiles) This gives me a very fantastic sight. I love animals and I do take care of them. Way back home, we got mini-zoo and here in my rented apartment, got fish in mini-aquarium because they are the only animals allowed in here. lol. Thanks for sharing your poems again especially the latest ones. A blessed Sunday full of vigor to you and your family!
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:13:00 AM
I hope we never lose our animals such as deer. they are such a welcome sight as in this lovely poem.
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Date: 8/18/2012 9:53:00 AM
Wow Sara, this is an awesome poem. just love this.
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Date: 8/18/2012 7:57:00 AM
Ah yes, the beauty of deer, I just love it when deer make it into our yard early in the morning! Their beauty is astounding, I just love it! Just like your poem, fantastic and very delightful my friend! I really enjoyed your creative and fun loving poem! And of course the dew is always welcome, Fabulous piece Sara, Great Work!!
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