Heavensent

there's a hole in my heart and it leads straight to hell
i miss you, i kiss you, i'm a slave to your spells
once lonely and lost in a desert of dreams
you came like a vision and silenced my screams
you fill me with joy as my soul gets spent
you're a gift from above
you're my love...heavensent

through trial after trial and storms of sad tears
on miles of misery i wasted in fear
you're a vision of beauty and this beast needs you here
you're the rose of my rage
you're my love...heavensent

the whispers you speak turn to whirlwinds inside
like a twister of thoughts i stay drunk on your wine
i eat from vile vines in your garden of sin
you're my angel in darkness
you're my love...heavensent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Congratulations on your win Tony in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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November 7, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Congrats Anthony on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry.. enjoy this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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November 7, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Powerful emotions conveyed so beautifully, Anthony. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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November 7, 2010 at 7:39 AM
THE CONTEST IS OVER AND YOU ARE THE WINNER..Sara
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November 6, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Anthony, I thank you for supporting my contest with this incredible poem.. Congratulations. Love, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Congratulations Anthony on yor top ten placement in Audrey's stimulating contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, anthony
Roberts Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 8:58 AM
this one confused me , can't quite tell if she's supposed to be good or evil, but good rhyming and flow to this interesting piece
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