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Heavens Tears

heaven's tears
                                                      In hot desert sands
                                                            frog's revive

naturehaiku

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Thom Allen

March 18, 2017 at 12:24 PM

Just a shout-out post to all Terry Lee's friends and followers: My Dear sister Terry Lee made 'the Transition' at the end of January 2017. In an effort to preserve her work; I am reviewing all her poems. As I scan through your comments, I discover aspects of Terry I had not been in touch with; and I appreciate your compassionate, kind words; gifts that have facilitated my own comfort. Consciousness is energy we all share which cannot be destroyed. Thanks to all of you. Thom Allen

Terry O'Leary

May 20, 2012 at 8:02 AM

Another pleasant stroll through Haikudom... ;-)) Terry

Terry L. Allen

May 20, 2012 at 9:03 PM

Thank you much Terry. Huggs TLee

Aditya Mathur

May 5, 2012 at 2:45 AM

Nice, i really liked it.

Terry L. Allen

May 5, 2012 at 4:30 PM

Thank you so much Aditya for your kind review. TLee

Kash Poet

May 4, 2012 at 7:51 PM

Nice haiku.Enjoyed.

Terry L. Allen

May 4, 2012 at 8:29 PM

I'm glad to see you know about the desert frogs. Imagine waiting burried in the sand waiting for rain for up to 2 years. Thanks Kash for you praise. Huggs TLee

Joy Wellington

May 4, 2012 at 7:16 PM

Hi Terry...when Heaven cries the desert sands will cool and frogs will peep out from their hiding place. Good command of the Haiku. Well done! Joy Wells

Terry L. Allen

May 4, 2012 at 7:26 PM

There are frogs that stay burried in the sand up to 2years waiting for the rain in (suspended animation I think is the term) and then come out and mate only to hybernate when the water dries up again. Thank you for your kind review Joy. Hugs TLee

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