Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Heaven's Shore

I will love you forever 
To my last breath
Until I'm sleeping 
The sleep of death

And when I rise 
On Heaven's shore
I will exist only 
To love you more

Forever My Love Valentine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by : BJ Legros Kelley
1/2/2022

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Connie Marcum Wong February 11, 2022 at 10:14 PM I love the idea of love crossing the boundaries of time and dimensions. This is divine Timothy. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo Timothy Mcguire February 14, 2022 at 4:20 PM Thank you Connie, that was my thought in this poem, a love that will carry on through eternity.

Paghunda Zahid February 9, 2022 at 10:45 AM Aw that's super cool Timothy Mcguire February 9, 2022 at 3:24 PM Thank you so much Pagunda, the best to you and yours!

Heidi Sands February 9, 2022 at 9:56 AM Congratulations for your win with this great poem. I love it :) Timothy Mcguire February 9, 2022 at 3:24 PM Thank you so much Heidi!

Bj Legros Kelley February 9, 2022 at 12:13 AM This is beautiful! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! I am faving it. Thank you for entering this precious poem in the contest, God bless you ~ BJ Timothy Mcguire February 9, 2022 at 1:41 AM Thank you so much BJ. The best to you and yours.

Line Gauthier April 20, 2020 at 8:19 PM Who could possibly tire of reading this one ~ love it. Timothy Mcguire April 20, 2020 at 8:54 PM Thank you

Lindsay Laurie January 28, 2020 at 11:27 PM Much love and sweetness in your poem Timothy - Lindsay

Line Gauthier January 23, 2020 at 8:53 AM Back with most deserved congrats, Timothy. Superbly done. Timothy Mcguire January 23, 2020 at 4:34 PM Thank you a thousand times Miss Line!

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 22, 2020 at 11:25 PM A breathtaking, wonderful rhyme, Timothy. Love it! Timothy Mcguire January 23, 2020 at 12:33 AM Thank you so much Evelyn. God bless you and yours!

Line Gauthier January 22, 2020 at 8:54 PM O my goodness! What a lovely poem! Wow~ Wow~ Wow~ A definite FAVE for me. Timothy Mcguire January 23, 2020 at 12:35 AM Thank you Miss Line, I'm proud of this one. Thank you friend!