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Heaven's Shore

I will love you forever 
To my last breath
Until I'm sleeping 
The sleep of death

And when I rise 
On Heaven's shore
I will exist only 
To love you more

Forever My Love Valentine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by : BJ Legros Kelley
1/2/2022

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/11/2022 10:14:00 PM

I love the idea of love crossing the boundaries of time and dimensions. This is divine Timothy. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/14/2022 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Connie, that was my thought in this poem, a love that will carry on through eternity.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 2/9/2022 10:45:00 AM

Aw that's super cool

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/9/2022 3:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Pagunda, the best to you and yours!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/9/2022 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations for your win with this great poem. I love it :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/9/2022 3:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/9/2022 12:13:00 AM

This is beautiful! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! I am faving it. Thank you for entering this precious poem in the contest, God bless you ~ BJ

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/9/2022 1:41:00 AM

Thank you so much BJ. The best to you and yours.