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Heaven's Shore

I will love you forever To my last breath Until I'm sleeping The sleep of death And when I rise On Heaven's shore I will exist only To love you more Forever My Love Valentine Poetry Contest Sponsored by : BJ Legros Kelley 1/2/2022

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Date: 2/11/2022 10:14:00 PM
I love the idea of love crossing the boundaries of time and dimensions. This is divine Timothy. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/14/2022 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Connie, that was my thought in this poem, a love that will carry on through eternity.
Date: 2/9/2022 10:45:00 AM
Aw that's super cool
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/9/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Pagunda, the best to you and yours!
Date: 2/9/2022 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations for your win with this great poem. I love it :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/9/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi!
Date: 2/9/2022 12:13:00 AM
This is beautiful! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! I am faving it. Thank you for entering this precious poem in the contest, God bless you ~ BJ
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/9/2022 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so much BJ. The best to you and yours.
Date: 4/20/2020 8:19:00 PM
Who could possibly tire of reading this one ~ love it.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/20/2020 8:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/28/2020 11:27:00 PM
Much love and sweetness in your poem Timothy - Lindsay
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Date: 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM
Back with most deserved congrats, Timothy. Superbly done.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/23/2020 4:34:00 PM
Thank you a thousand times Miss Line!
Date: 1/22/2020 11:25:00 PM
A breathtaking, wonderful rhyme, Timothy. Love it!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/23/2020 12:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Evelyn. God bless you and yours!
Date: 1/22/2020 8:54:00 PM
O my goodness! What a lovely poem! Wow~ Wow~ Wow~ A definite FAVE for me.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/23/2020 12:35:00 AM
Thank you Miss Line, I'm proud of this one. Thank you friend!

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