:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Heaven's Ghetto::::::::::::


slip n' slide white moon
space cadets glide in the shine
illustrious orb





~JSLaM

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/15/2011 5:34:00 AM

Hi Domo Roboto! Hope your move went fine! Now u must stop picking on the moon, poet friend...He is all alone up there...I love the illustrious orb...great descriptions here, Rocket Man. Happy Hollydays to you and yours. Gwendolen

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2011 2:14:00 PM

Lots for me to think on Joey..may i call you that.? (i appreciate your great comment on the write of mine) thanks Joe..

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 12/5/2011 8:30:00 PM

Nice one.....smiles....chiquita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2011 8:21:00 PM

Well JSLAM, If heaven;s ghetto... i need to get out of here..lol.. get it.. i must be living in heaven right now... ha ha ha! Earth is ghetto.... I wonder if h3ll looks like the back side of the sun.. i'm just being silly.. i'm here thinking about you .. How are you? Have not heard from you in a while....enjoyed, take care and have yourself a wonderful night,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/3/2011 8:53:00 PM

I'm kidding. earth is as real as it gets.. her and her beauty

John Aaron Green

Date: 11/29/2011 10:38:00 PM

nice poem,,,great use of words,,,i havnt written one yet,,,but im learning....

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/27/2011 11:45:00 AM

I really like how you describe the moon here, very fun way to do so, Joey and thank you fro dropping by my poems, you're so awesome yourself! :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:26:00 AM

J.S., ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! VERY PRETTY POEM...Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/19/2011 10:28:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your write tonight, JSLambert! I love poems about the moon, even if the poem is blowing up the moon! Well written haiku! You write interesting poetry...I'll just have to read more to see! Great poem!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:46:00 PM

This makes me want to slide on a moonbeam! But come on, a ghetto? haha. You are funny, Joey. I'm outta here for the night. Glad I saw you on my way out. LUv, Andrea