Heaven's Gate

the ruins that I live in
created by the pain
where darkness never falters
candles won't illuminate
where conviction hides in corners
truth finally penetrates
my dreams have now been shredded
outside of Heaven's gate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 7, 2010 at 4:44 PM
the first two lines really help the flow, and wow this one i surely enjoyed
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