Heaven's Doormat

Heaven’s doormat scribes our birthnames, woven from fine wicker, oblivious to sins or fame; holy entrance richer. Designed to cleanse our feet, past relatives we meet; entering, angels greet. Jesus will chat. Heaven’s doormat. Thursday, October 21, 2021 (Quietus)
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Your "Heaven's Doormat" is a creative write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed autumn day writing away................
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:44 PM
This flows so well, Robert... And if Heaven is, indeed, oblivious to sins -- Then I'm in like Sin! ~ Errol Flynn
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Love this! Oblivious to sins or fame…what a cool line!
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