Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Heaven's Door

by Michael J Falotico

                                               Bridges built to a new tomorrow..
                                             Brushed back tears of faded sorrow..
                                       A glossy horizon with vibrant colors framed..
                                   Roads surrounded by walls of flowers not tamed..
                                   Leading to walkway where light shows the door..
                                         Inside a feeling of joy and love evermore..
                           I wake from a dream of Heaven or whatever God has in store..


"As You Like It" contest

   ~ 1st place ~

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Dinda Minardi June 13, 2011 at 7:28 AM Wow... this is massive. No wonder you got the 1st place :)

Sara Kendrick May 21, 2011 at 5:58 AM Congratulations on this win with a great work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 9:59 AM Congratulations Michael on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 6, 2011 at 3:03 PM thankxx W.K. of mine for the enlarged photo and I just entered your brilliant contest ..with such inspirational photo to create poetry from..luv.. happy weekend to u two lovebirds from us two lovebirds.. your Jersey Girl in travel mode..

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2011 at 2:08 PM wowie, this was SO well deserved, Michael!! congratulations.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 6, 2011 at 12:44 PM Super congrats on this beauty, Michael :) -- and yup, I am happy to be those eyes, however crazy I can be ;) -- hugs :) enjoy your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 6, 2011 at 4:48 AM Soup Mail luv..

Sara Kendrick May 5, 2011 at 4:38 PM Great testimony of your faith..Congratulations on your win..Enjoyed..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest...Sara

Carrie Richards May 5, 2011 at 4:29 PM This is such a beauty!! I am loving this hopeful and inspirational poem! Congratulations, Michael!!

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2011 at 3:26 PM Dear Michael, congratulations on your first-place win! I'm so glad to see you at the top with a poem this remarkable. And I wish I could follow you on this "walkway" because the light of hope shines in this poem. Awesome, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2011 at 3:15 PM Fantastic and Phenomenal .. so glad it won my White Knight ...your Jersey Girl in awe mode..luv forever and always..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2011 at 3:12 PM Congrats Michael on your first place win in Brian's cool contest luv.. amazing piece and awesome win to enjoy ..your Jersey Girl is in happy mode for u luv..

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet May 5, 2011 at 2:06 PM Fabulous read really enjoyed this.Thanks Michael for your nice and kind comment.You deserved 1st.place with this one.~Teresa~

Wilma Neels May 5, 2011 at 12:08 PM This one says quite a lot Michael, I love your ending as if to say it's okay whatever happens you are okay with it because it is in God's will. I love this.. Good luck for the contest.. Love W

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2011 at 11:07 AM yeow, michael... poetic gems flow; a delight so heavenly.. sure winner! ) huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 4, 2011 at 9:21 PM I sure wish I would open that door as well, Michael! This is beautiful and yup I hope to see this among the winners :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2011 at 8:08 PM wow, michael. OUtstanding. I fully expect to see this beauty in the top!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 4, 2011 at 6:10 PM As always enjoyed the humor and wit in the write, Michael, A few can write with such humor and wit

Poet Destroyer A May 4, 2011 at 5:29 PM nice, Michael.. it seems as if everlasting bliss follows you where ever you set your mind or dreams.. i love all the beyond beauty in your dreams.. Even there you are granted with happiness and delight... Whatever God, feels you or we deserve... i'm sure he has lots more light and pleasure for your soul... enjoyed this wonderful poem... good luck in the contest,..p.d.