Heavens Breaking Down

i see you and you see me your breaking me down completely your words say so much i hate it but i miss your touch days seem to pass by why did you have to lie false hope comes crashing down the grave laid out you have found thoughts keep spinning im never winning rock bottom i have finally hit sometimes i can't deal with this ***** im in a carnival of souls made up of a million holes trapt in the darkness of the night wanting to hold on tight go ahead take a bow its all over now darkness sweeps in ive finally paid for my sin
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February 2, 2012 at 6:01 AM
Enjoyed your good work Jamie, Elizabeth
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February 2, 2012 at 5:20 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jamie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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