Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

Heavenly Path

I travel unravel far scene unseen, concealed congealed 
under future shroud of obscure time cloud

last mile
of wile

walking 
thinking

what’s that lies
beyond eyes

path ancient
divergent

muddled life
in strife

sole choice
soul’s voice

divine
design

Ever make no mistake, for soul’s sake take awake, 
without any wrath, the heavenly path

                      
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Sotto Poet January 10, 2024 at 6:31 AM Dear Sublimal, I must say that your work is incredibly inventive and thought-provoking, and I think that it aligns seamlessly with the stipulations of the Hilo poet's contest. Your exceptional skill in crafting this piece is truly commendable, and I do not doubt that it will be well-received. Best wishes to you in all your future endeavors. Subimal Sinha-Roy January 11, 2024 at 9:23 PM Thank you for your kind visit, and for your beautiful and encouraging comments that I value so much.