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Contest: Creative Haiku
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
~awarded 1st place ~
~awarded 3rd place in under 12 lines contest~

dainty daffodil your golden trumpet fanfares the dawning of spring 09-18-14 Published in Haiku Journal #33 by Prolific Press

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Date: 3/26/2019 2:48:00 PM
Delightful and appealing as a haiku should be. Congratulations, Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/26/2019 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Geoffrey I am delighted you dropped by to read one of my older poems, unless they are in a contest they rarely get read, except this one has found its way on the web and onto various fb and other social media applications and is one of my most read poems:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/25/2019 8:18:00 PM
A beauty, Jan! Congrats on your publication and this current win! Such a lovely Haiku! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/26/2019 3:41:00 PM
thanks so much Sandra, it was Charmaine who suggested I submit some haiku for publication and I was delighted they chose 2 to be in the same book:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/25/2019 3:39:00 PM
Lovely, Jan. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/25/2019 4:44:00 PM
thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/25/2019 1:32:00 PM
This is a gorgeous haiku, Jan. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/25/2019 4:44:00 PM
thanks Carol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/24/2019 4:26:00 PM
Ah, good to have a little published gem to weigh in with on these occasions! And what good timing for this one.. it was only last weekend that I cheered at the very first daff! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2019 5:12:00 PM
gosh we've had them in the garden for about 3 weeks now spring arrives early here, that said in 2017 we had one in flower on Christmas day!:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/24/2019 2:00:00 PM
YOu came out with gun loaded, Jan. Using your awesome spring poem!! Congrats!!
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Date: 2/24/2019 3:49:00 PM
thanks Andrea I am very proud of this little poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/24/2019 1:43:00 PM
This is indeed a special poem Jan <3 I'm so glad you threw it in the ring. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 2/24/2019 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Mo its one of my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2019 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Jan!
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Date: 2/14/2019 6:31:00 PM
thanks PM I'm very proud of this poem especially the fact it was printed in haiku journal as I never know if I've written a real haiku or not:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2019 8:30:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Date: 2/14/2019 6:30:00 PM
thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/26/2018 10:24:00 PM
haiku perfection, haiga grand, the title a modernist addition, as you know, me being a traditionalist I don't agree, regardless it does not detract from your talent as a haiku composer, write on special lady. Congratulations on both counts hugs Mick
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Date: 5/27/2018 3:47:00 AM
aww thanks Mick - I was persuaded by another member Charmaine to submit some of my poems to haiku Journal and this was one of two of my haiku that were printed in that edition. A blogger in the US picked up on my poems and did an article about the best haiku in the world which made me lol as I struggle writing the form and an American soap actress had one of my poems as a photo on her FB page:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/8/2018 10:10:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 4/8/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thanks Tim its a special poem as it was one of the first haiku I had published:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/4/2018 6:48:00 PM
So nice to read this lovely Haiku again, Jan. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/5/2018 4:08:00 AM
Thanks Sandra I am very prod of this poem i think it was the first one I had published along with another at the same time:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 9:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful haiku!
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Date: 4/4/2018 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan, excellent write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/4/2018 4:43:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 5:16:00 PM
Lovely hakiu Jan, some just coming up in our garden so hopefully spring has now arrived. Congrats. Tom
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Date: 4/3/2018 5:20:00 PM
We've had them in the garden since the end of January and now have a lots in full bloom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 4:11:00 PM
LOVE it, Jan! Congrats!! Janice
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 3:36:00 PM
Back with most deserving congrats, Jan.
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 2:28:00 PM
I love it. Wonderful Haiku. Congratulations! xomo
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Date: 4/3/2018 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Mo, i am so so proud of this little poem, its one of my favourites and very special as it was published in a haiku journal:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/3/2018 2:05:00 PM
This is such a perfect picture. I wait all the long cold dark days of winter for the golden fanfare of spring.
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Date: 4/3/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for the place in the contest Deborah and hopefully the poem will get more reads as a result of the win:-) It was one of my first haiku poems and i was so delighted it was accepted by haiku journal for publication:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/9/2018 11:38:00 PM
A beauty of a gem. Superb haiku, Jan.
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:43:00 AM
It's one of my favourites Line and i was so delighted it was considered good enough for publication:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2017 8:03:00 PM
Very pretty, Jan!
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/13/2017 7:37:00 PM
Brilliant haiku!! No wonder it is published in reputed journal!! Congrats Jan, for your placement with this magnificent piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/14/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Teddy I would never have submitted my poem to the journal if I hadn't been encouraged by Charmaine Chircop. In the end I think they accepted 3 of my poems and another one was published in their three line poetry journal:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/9/2017 11:25:00 AM
Lovely Jan :) Congrats !
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Date: 6/10/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thanks Lenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/8/2017 2:47:00 PM
Jan, I thought yours was one of my very favorites in this contest. Congrats!!
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Date: 6/10/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I remember being so so pleased when i placed with Charlotte for this little poem and having it published in a haiku journal really was the icing on the cake:-) It is still one of my favourite poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/6/2016 8:22:00 PM
I love this little haiku, Jan,.
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Date: 3/18/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Carol I am so sorry I've just found your comment:-( hugs Jan xx
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